I focused on flow, transitions, and how shapes interact with each other. After critique, I made adjustments to improve cohesion and visual balance. I refined the transitions, thickened certain forms, and adjusted overall alignment. Specifically, I repositioned the 2 to sit more naturally within the Y, thickened the O in the 4, and improved the curve between the 5 and 6. I also rotated the A to better align with the 7. These updates created a stronger sense of movement and unity, making the final design feel deliberate and cohesive.